Thursday, January 2, 2014

Expectations - The Haiku!!


She left,
&
I silently observed;

The death of
expectations...

for Good.
Haiku-Heights

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14 comments:

  1. UnknownJanuary 2, 2014 at 8:20 PM

    The flight of her and plight afterwards,well said.

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  2. PealogicJanuary 2, 2014 at 10:03 PM

    Oh dear. It is sad, but the punctuation gives it levity for me. Sorry if that is the wrong reaction.
    Ciao
    Pea

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    1. HemantJanuary 3, 2014 at 11:16 AM

      Thanks for the feedback Pea...I would be happy if you suggest a correction :)

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  3. Milan RajkumarJanuary 3, 2014 at 2:02 PM

    realities of life life,nicely depicted !

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  4. smiling soulJanuary 4, 2014 at 9:28 AM

    Everything happens for good... :) nice concept!

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  5. smiling soulJanuary 4, 2014 at 9:29 AM

    Everything happens for good.. nice concept! :)

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  6. Sri ValliJanuary 4, 2014 at 9:10 PM

    Interesting thought!

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  7. JerlyJanuary 23, 2014 at 10:05 AM

    Real Good Haiku. And a thought I believe in. Sometimes when even minimum expectations are not being met, the death of a relationship is indeed the end of pain and
    feels GOOD!

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  8. Saru SinghalFebruary 4, 2014 at 6:02 PM

    I can relate to it. Seen death like this many times in the past few months... :(

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  9. HemantFebruary 10, 2014 at 12:02 PM

    @Jerly - What you quoted can only be realized after experience...glad that u liked it..

    @Saru - That's sad!! I wish no one goes through it as its painful...even if its for good!!

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  10. Shesha ChaturvediFebruary 10, 2014 at 6:31 PM

    Brilliant and very strongly scribbled! Too Good!

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  11. Ranita SinhaMarch 15, 2014 at 12:32 AM

    Me too lost so many near and dear ones that I can relate to your lines..very well written..

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  12. JasmeetMarch 26, 2014 at 12:16 AM

    It was simple yet effective to think

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