Thursday, January 2, 2014

Expectations - The Haiku!!


She left,
&
I silently observed;

The death of
expectations...

for Good.


Haiku-Heights

photo credit - www.briansaar.com

14 comments:

  1. The flight of her and plight afterwards,well said.

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  2. Oh dear. It is sad, but the punctuation gives it levity for me. Sorry if that is the wrong reaction.
    Ciao
    Pea

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    1. Thanks for the feedback Pea...I would be happy if you suggest a correction :)

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  3. realities of life life,nicely depicted !

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  4. Everything happens for good... :) nice concept!

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  5. Everything happens for good.. nice concept! :)

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  6. Real Good Haiku. And a thought I believe in. Sometimes when even minimum expectations are not being met, the death of a relationship is indeed the end of pain and
    feels GOOD!

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  7. I can relate to it. Seen death like this many times in the past few months... :(

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  8. @Jerly - What you quoted can only be realized after experience...glad that u liked it..

    @Saru - That's sad!! I wish no one goes through it as its painful...even if its for good!!

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    1. It is painful but guess, part of life. :(

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  9. Brilliant and very strongly scribbled! Too Good!

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  10. Me too lost so many near and dear ones that I can relate to your lines..very well written..

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  11. It was simple yet effective to think

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