The flight of her and plight afterwards,well said.
Oh dear. It is sad, but the punctuation gives it levity for me. Sorry if that is the wrong reaction. CiaoPea
Thanks for the feedback Pea...I would be happy if you suggest a correction :)
realities of life life,nicely depicted !
Everything happens for good... :) nice concept!
Everything happens for good.. nice concept! :)
Real Good Haiku. And a thought I believe in. Sometimes when even minimum expectations are not being met, the death of a relationship is indeed the end of pain and feels GOOD!
I can relate to it. Seen death like this many times in the past few months... :(
@Jerly - What you quoted can only be realized after experience...glad that u liked it..@Saru - That's sad!! I wish no one goes through it as its painful...even if its for good!!
It is painful but guess, part of life. :(
Brilliant and very strongly scribbled! Too Good!
Me too lost so many near and dear ones that I can relate to your lines..very well written..
It was simple yet effective to think
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