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Long
ago, in the pursuit of a peaceful life,
My
children marooned me; it was end of my pride;
I
always dreamed the end of this strife,
Attempt
to peace, always followed by a lack of strides.
Isolated
streets, with the smell of Gunpowder,
Feeling
of disdain, whom do I blame!
Gone
are the days, I was the reason of being prouder,
Promises
from both the sides, proven lame.
Enough
of bloodshed, shells and metals,
I am
still known as heaven on earth;
Sound
of guns defeating the sound of fallen petals,
My life
is still driven on thy mercy, ohh Urth!!!
In the
lap of river Jhelum, mellifluous & swish,
End of Discord, is all that I wish.
PS: This is an English sonnet with the rhyming scheme of abab cdcd efef gg (Also known as Shakespearean Sonnet). This is a song dedicated to people in Kashmir.
Urth - Goddess of fate in Greek Mythology
Urth - Goddess of fate in Greek Mythology
(rhyming scheme of abab cdcd efef gg )- please can you explain me how! :)
ReplyDeletenice feel!
Thanks for dropping by...I wonder how the poem created a nice feel, though it's written to present unfortunate Kashmiriyat...
DeleteRhyming scheme..online aao...tab bataunga :)
Beautifully rhymed poem...Lovely!!
ReplyDeletethanks vALLI...m happy that u liked it..
DeleteThanks for the visit and read :)
ReplyDeleteThis is such a beautiful sonnet. Great piece of writing Hemant!
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