Sunday, January 15, 2012

Separation!!!!!



where have you gone!
leaving me alone
I don't like this solitude

limitless moan
darkness fawn
feeling as if dying on rood

loosing my brawn
totally withdrawn
feels as if I am nude

come back for the sake of our love


Don't miss the recorded version in my voice:-

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    1. Thank you....m glad that you liked it :)

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  2. Nicely done! Seperation always provides a new meaning to the mystery called life! :)

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    1. That's so true...separation leads to a new union...

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  3. Great writing. the voice add is the X factor for this post!

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  4. Someone being badly missed..well composed.Short yet impactful.

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  5. nice one doing things differently is known as hemant :) good keep it up!

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  6. Thats a huge compliment Sowmya...Thank you

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