Thursday, April 10, 2014

I Love you rhyme



Behind the veil
A beautiful face
A doe like walk
Only thrice we talked

Remembering first one
When you asked time
It made me rhyme
The sunny song
It rained along

In the second chance
I knew your name
You knew mine
That wasn’t so enough
I tried to bluff
That made you huff
Soon I realized
The blunder I made
Inside I prayed
Our eyes still stayed
Then you smiled
Situation turned mild
& we spoke
Something did click
The next meeting fixed

The third one came
Wait was infinite
You looked so bright
Unforgettable sight
We hesitated, we talked
We shied, we laughed
As if time stopped
And then good bye
We both felt dry

Its been three months
Seeking another confront
Days becoming blue
The words are few
I Love You!!!!

6 comments:

  1. HI, I am a minion with Pam's Unconventional Alliance. Looks like you are doing great. I loved your poem. Good luck and keep up the great work.

    Mary-andering Creatively

    Mary-andering Among the Pages

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    1. Mary, I had been to your blog and u r just being humble while calling urself minion....and thanks for appreciating my work :)

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  2. Awww: "We hesitated, we talked. We shied, we laughed"...sigh exactly what happens ;)

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    1. Completely agree with you..It does happen in most of the encounters :)

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  3. The opening of this poem reminds me of the "book Alchemist" in which the boy keep meeting the girl in the desert....good one!!

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    1. Yeah..i remember that one now :)
      Thanks for dropping by!!

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