poetry is inner thoughts ..keep it up..keep on writing .. everything in life is perseverance and hard work..
A brilliant piece with a twist of thoughts. I like it...Nicely written Hemant.Saru
Inspiring .. with just 5 lines!
@Firoze: Thank you for dropping by...you gave me words of motivation :)@Saru: Thank you di....ur comments are always a source of motivation. @Bagya: I am glad that you liked it :)
lovely first attempt at poetry
That was sugar-coated:)Love, ~Moonlight~ :)
Thanks everyone :)
One word, beautiful!
awesome reflection of the call of the nature....
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