Monday, October 24, 2011

My so called first piece written during 2009 September....

She told me not to be scared,
She told me not to be upset,
Then she whispered into my ears
to be calm and cool,
She was the first ray of sun that early morning.
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10 comments:

  1. Firoze Shakir Photographer No1October 25, 2011 at 8:49 AM

    poetry is inner thoughts ..keep it up..keep on writing .. everything in life is perseverance and hard work..

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  2. Saru SinghalOctober 25, 2011 at 10:43 PM

    A brilliant piece with a twist of thoughts. I like it...Nicely written Hemant.

    Saru

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  3. AnonymousOctober 25, 2011 at 11:48 PM

    Inspiring .. with just 5 lines!

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  4. HemantOctober 25, 2011 at 11:59 PM

    @Firoze: Thank you for dropping by...you gave me words of motivation :)
    @Saru: Thank you di....ur comments are always a source of motivation.
    @Bagya: I am glad that you liked it :)

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  5. Sujatha SathyaOctober 26, 2011 at 1:16 PM

    lovely first attempt at poetry

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  6. UnknownOctober 26, 2011 at 6:15 PM

    That was sugar-coated:)

    Love, ~Moonlight~ :)

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  7. Deepa GopalOctober 27, 2011 at 12:19 PM

    Wonderful thought:)

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  8. HemantNovember 1, 2011 at 12:10 AM

    Thanks everyone :)

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  9. CяystalNovember 21, 2011 at 4:04 PM

    One word, beautiful!

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  10. UnknownNovember 21, 2011 at 5:27 PM

    awesome reflection of the call of the nature....

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