Monday, October 24, 2011

My so called first piece written during 2009 September....

She told me not to be scared,
She told me not to be upset,
Then she whispered into my ears
to be calm and cool,
She was the first ray of sun that early morning.

10 comments:

  1. poetry is inner thoughts ..keep it up..keep on writing .. everything in life is perseverance and hard work..

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  2. A brilliant piece with a twist of thoughts. I like it...Nicely written Hemant.

    Saru

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  3. @Firoze: Thank you for dropping by...you gave me words of motivation :)
    @Saru: Thank you di....ur comments are always a source of motivation.
    @Bagya: I am glad that you liked it :)

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  4. That was sugar-coated:)

    Love, ~Moonlight~ :)

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  5. awesome reflection of the call of the nature....

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